Post by Chibi on Sept 15, 2005 18:58:06 GMT -5
WARNING THE FOLLOWING CONTAINS SOME SPOILERS AND VAST INFORMATION ON THE BOOK SO DON'T BLAME ME. I'M SORRY FOR MY LACK OF CODDING BUT I'M TOO LAZY TO DO THAT SO YEAH ENJOY AND NO EDITING I GOT LAZY AND I'M NOT DONE THE BOOK THIS IS JUST THE FIRST PART. ENJOY 
Long ago in the land of AlagaËsia, there lived a boy named Eragon he was of string build no one knew much about his past just the fact that he was left behind and raised by his uncle and aunt. He was later notified of that later he hunted for a food to feed him and his dragon. He didn’t dare return home at least not until he had the money and the bravery to face his cousin, he did regret what his dragon had made him do but he didn’t dare lurk in the past. His deep brown eyes locked onto a wounded deer but before he could get to it a dragon of ruby and purple scales whipped down and sunk it’s teeth defiantly and broke the ribs and bones of the deer Eragon watched in awe as it flew away north towards Narda deep within the spine where he first met his Dragon Saphira he called through his mind to her she took awhile to answer but he could feel her up ahead he ran out into the open as he ran she slowly picked him up with her nose and carried him into the air.
Why did you ask of me?
Did you see the dragon with the ruby scales? She asked with wonder and waited for Eragon to answer. He nodded and sent a image of the dragon and the direction in which it was headed she banked north towards Narda the sun was setting fast by the time they reached the trees started to melt into the shadows of the fading sunlight caressed with reds, oranges of many shades and pinks of every tone, Eragon watched in awe and saw fire in the distance he rubbed Saphira’s scales and she dived down gentle and walked towards the fire. Eragon’s stinging legs, walked slowly towards the flames and thinking to himself not to make a sound he cracked a twig long hair and a thick whiskered head turned facing him his heart raced and the slender figure walked slowly towards him he ran ignoring the pain that burned at his legs he turned to run but Saphira stopped him his eyes went wide as a soft image appeared in his mind of a female. What that’s a girl? He asked her she nodded yes turn around Eragon. She told him calmly within her mind, reluctantly his brown eyes turned slowly and looked from her feet up around the armor that covered her slender form he quickly looked to her eyes they were more piercing than any other he had ever seen they seemed to glow in the night as her black mid black wavy hair circled her elegant face she blinked she smiled gracefully, and slowly made her way to Eragon her steps silent she took his rough hand in her own soft one and held in her palm “You have been through many hardships I, can tell by your hand it tells me that you lost someone dear to you. Am I correct?” she asked in her velvet tone, his eyes widen but he wasn’t surprised by her knowledge Brom’s wise words echoed in his mind from that time he had spent in Caravahall.
The words rang into his mind “A dragon’s power is mysterious in many ways. No on is quite sure if the dragons themselves now their entire power.”Those were Brom’s last words that echoed into his mind. He stared blankly at the girl there looming over her was the dragon that had snatched his kill. “Da name’s Muntage and that there behind me is me dragon Kovu!” she said with glee Eragon eyed her as she walked past him and smile at Saphira who lowered her head and allowed her to climb and sit on her nose while she rubbed her nose gently. He yelled at Saphira “why does she get to sit on your nose for fun after you just met her?” he roared in his dragons mind she scoffed her talon-like feet and held her nose high embracing the feeling of a female touch. She bellowed into Eragon’s mind making him jump in fear “Never put a female down! She might not be food nor a clear friend but I like the feel of her hands they are gentle and smooth she is caring! Let us stay and befriend her she could become a dragon rider with you!” Eragon thought about it and brushed it off and walked up to the dragon that Muntage had he lowered his massive head his muscles rippled as he lowered his head gently. Muntage leaped off Saphira’s nose and walked towards Eragon she bowed respectively and gazed into his eyes she tried to read his mind he could feel it her eyes were like doors they opened the doors to his mind and sat, waiting for answers.
“May I ask your name?” she said warmly in his mind he was awe stricken but no matter he wanted to talk to her he had many questions he walked over to the fire and sat the dragons and Muntage followed suit. Eragon sat and paced a pot over it Muntage didn’t understand why the male did not respond. Eragon sensed Saphira’s grim embracement of his rudeness towards Muntage. “My name is Eragon I came from the other side of the spine, my dragon’s name is Saphira and she is glad to meet you!” he replied feeling better to get that off his chest Saphira stirred and laid her large body down and rested her head by Muntage who patted her nose, “I’m glad to meet you Eragon! Your name is of great heritage you know, you were named after an elf that was the first of the dragon riders” she said sensing that Eragon knew about this. He nodded and poured some salt into the pot “I have heard of the stories but what I wonder is how you know this?” he asked with great interest Muntage giggled and patted Saphira’s head “I was told by a trader named Brom and his band of traveler’s I was very curious about the vast ways of his knowledge I was hungry for more of his great stories, I did all I could and he told me about it but before he left he gave me a saddle not fit for a hose but for a dragon I knew then that he had seen and gotten to know Kovu.” She nodded and gazed at Kou who laid by Eragon to ensure that Muntage didn’t get all the attention. Eragon dished the food out he and Muntage ate while Saphira and Kovu ripped the deer in half and swallowed it whole they curled up and fell silently to sleep.
Muntage moved over closer to Eragon and place her head gently on his shoulder and closed her eyes. Eragon welcomed her warmth on his cold shoulder her sleek black hair felt soft like a puppy’s fur he too welcomed the grace of slumber. The suns rays hit Muntage’s face as she slowly opened her eyes only to find Eragon’s arm securely around her she smiled and gently combed his mind for him to wake up. “Eragon wake up please I cannot move” no answer came from him but his arm slowly moved Muntage got up and went to get some wood Kovu was alerted and held his head up to watch Muntage who gathered and placed fire wood in the pit she had made her mind suddenly was filled with roses and tress of lush greens and pine she smiled and looked at Eragon who grimaced in pain and lifted his pants only to see that the scabs on his knees cracked. Muntage ran towards Kovu and grabbed her pack she rushed over to Eragon and placed her hands over his scabs and ripped them off Eragon roared in pain Saphira bellowed in her throat but Kovu nudged her she calmed down. Muntage placed her palms on his knees and chanted some words they could be heard by Eragon her hands glowed and there was a strange feeling in hi legs, they were healed not a bruise nor scratch.
“Thank you but how?” “Not how why?” he asked as it echoed into her mind she smiled and handed him the pack “Here there is a lake not far Kovu will show you there is soap and armory I’m sure it will fit you.” She said her violet eyes glittered as she motioned for Kovu to take Eragon to the lake, as they left Eragon smiled at Muntage for the first time it was a deep thank you smile as he followed the large dragon with amusement at its massive steps that rattled the earth. The male dragons were larger than the females, what amused Eragon was that maybe Saphira was starting to form a bond with Kovu and just maybe they could be mates and breed a new race of powerful dragons like the dragons and elevens did long before his time. As they neared he heard the rushing of water the lake was flowing Kovu laid down looking the opposite way of Eragon as she quickly stripped down to his birthday suit and scrambled through the pack and jumped into the freezing cold lake but it was refreshing he scrubbed every part of his body with care as well as his face the soap smelled like vanilla a gentle vanilla.
Muntage waited for Eragon and Kovu to return it was awkward sitting with a female dragon but Saphira wasn’t ditzy she let a low roar rock her throat and nuzzled Muntage who patted her the earth started to rumble as Kovu walked the earth Eragon stood with pride with the navy armor on Eragon smiled with pride he locked eyes with Muntage and leaped down off of Kovu’s massive head 10 feet above the ground a new power growing within him he ran towards her and hugged her “Thank you for this armor but where did you get this” he asked with amazement she smiled and poked the fire “I was working for a black smith that was when I found Kovu’s egg it was my duty to protect it I thought it was of great value but it wasn’t when the traders came I asked they said it was wroth nothing my efforts were tireless. So I decide that to feed my mother and my older brother I would have to work.” She sighed Eragon slowly sunk this information in.
Eragon spoke “but they said nothing you took a job and when you returned some strangers had destroyed something dearest to you right?” he said with sorrow she nodded a single sky blue tear fell from her eye Eragon whipped it away she smiled and he embraced her “I won’t let anything happen to you I promise” he said she sent vivid images of white doves and angels into his mind suddenly as the departed Eragon was knocked down by a shadow he struggled he kicked the person off with his legs it landed in the shadows and grunted in pain it launched at Eragon again who did his best Muntage looked behind her and saw a jade scaled dragon who attacked at Kovu fiercely they bellowed. Muntage cart wheeled and flipped onto Saphira’s tail who catapulted her onto Kovu’s head he stopped as did the dragon in front that was a bit smaller than Kovu. She then slid down the smooth scales of Kovu and leaped and flipped in between Eragon and the stranger who hissed in a male voice “move!” it spoke Muntage didn’t move.
“My name is Thanos yours? Girl?” he snarled and pulled his hood down revealing chestnut shoulder length hair his deep blue eyes glared at Eragon he walked over to Muntage and took her hand she ripped it away from him and walked away. Thanos was silent Eragon followed her she sat and glared daggers as Thanos joined them.
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Long ago in the land of AlagaËsia, there lived a boy named Eragon he was of string build no one knew much about his past just the fact that he was left behind and raised by his uncle and aunt. He was later notified of that later he hunted for a food to feed him and his dragon. He didn’t dare return home at least not until he had the money and the bravery to face his cousin, he did regret what his dragon had made him do but he didn’t dare lurk in the past. His deep brown eyes locked onto a wounded deer but before he could get to it a dragon of ruby and purple scales whipped down and sunk it’s teeth defiantly and broke the ribs and bones of the deer Eragon watched in awe as it flew away north towards Narda deep within the spine where he first met his Dragon Saphira he called through his mind to her she took awhile to answer but he could feel her up ahead he ran out into the open as he ran she slowly picked him up with her nose and carried him into the air.
Why did you ask of me?
Did you see the dragon with the ruby scales? She asked with wonder and waited for Eragon to answer. He nodded and sent a image of the dragon and the direction in which it was headed she banked north towards Narda the sun was setting fast by the time they reached the trees started to melt into the shadows of the fading sunlight caressed with reds, oranges of many shades and pinks of every tone, Eragon watched in awe and saw fire in the distance he rubbed Saphira’s scales and she dived down gentle and walked towards the fire. Eragon’s stinging legs, walked slowly towards the flames and thinking to himself not to make a sound he cracked a twig long hair and a thick whiskered head turned facing him his heart raced and the slender figure walked slowly towards him he ran ignoring the pain that burned at his legs he turned to run but Saphira stopped him his eyes went wide as a soft image appeared in his mind of a female. What that’s a girl? He asked her she nodded yes turn around Eragon. She told him calmly within her mind, reluctantly his brown eyes turned slowly and looked from her feet up around the armor that covered her slender form he quickly looked to her eyes they were more piercing than any other he had ever seen they seemed to glow in the night as her black mid black wavy hair circled her elegant face she blinked she smiled gracefully, and slowly made her way to Eragon her steps silent she took his rough hand in her own soft one and held in her palm “You have been through many hardships I, can tell by your hand it tells me that you lost someone dear to you. Am I correct?” she asked in her velvet tone, his eyes widen but he wasn’t surprised by her knowledge Brom’s wise words echoed in his mind from that time he had spent in Caravahall.
The words rang into his mind “A dragon’s power is mysterious in many ways. No on is quite sure if the dragons themselves now their entire power.”Those were Brom’s last words that echoed into his mind. He stared blankly at the girl there looming over her was the dragon that had snatched his kill. “Da name’s Muntage and that there behind me is me dragon Kovu!” she said with glee Eragon eyed her as she walked past him and smile at Saphira who lowered her head and allowed her to climb and sit on her nose while she rubbed her nose gently. He yelled at Saphira “why does she get to sit on your nose for fun after you just met her?” he roared in his dragons mind she scoffed her talon-like feet and held her nose high embracing the feeling of a female touch. She bellowed into Eragon’s mind making him jump in fear “Never put a female down! She might not be food nor a clear friend but I like the feel of her hands they are gentle and smooth she is caring! Let us stay and befriend her she could become a dragon rider with you!” Eragon thought about it and brushed it off and walked up to the dragon that Muntage had he lowered his massive head his muscles rippled as he lowered his head gently. Muntage leaped off Saphira’s nose and walked towards Eragon she bowed respectively and gazed into his eyes she tried to read his mind he could feel it her eyes were like doors they opened the doors to his mind and sat, waiting for answers.
“May I ask your name?” she said warmly in his mind he was awe stricken but no matter he wanted to talk to her he had many questions he walked over to the fire and sat the dragons and Muntage followed suit. Eragon sat and paced a pot over it Muntage didn’t understand why the male did not respond. Eragon sensed Saphira’s grim embracement of his rudeness towards Muntage. “My name is Eragon I came from the other side of the spine, my dragon’s name is Saphira and she is glad to meet you!” he replied feeling better to get that off his chest Saphira stirred and laid her large body down and rested her head by Muntage who patted her nose, “I’m glad to meet you Eragon! Your name is of great heritage you know, you were named after an elf that was the first of the dragon riders” she said sensing that Eragon knew about this. He nodded and poured some salt into the pot “I have heard of the stories but what I wonder is how you know this?” he asked with great interest Muntage giggled and patted Saphira’s head “I was told by a trader named Brom and his band of traveler’s I was very curious about the vast ways of his knowledge I was hungry for more of his great stories, I did all I could and he told me about it but before he left he gave me a saddle not fit for a hose but for a dragon I knew then that he had seen and gotten to know Kovu.” She nodded and gazed at Kou who laid by Eragon to ensure that Muntage didn’t get all the attention. Eragon dished the food out he and Muntage ate while Saphira and Kovu ripped the deer in half and swallowed it whole they curled up and fell silently to sleep.
Muntage moved over closer to Eragon and place her head gently on his shoulder and closed her eyes. Eragon welcomed her warmth on his cold shoulder her sleek black hair felt soft like a puppy’s fur he too welcomed the grace of slumber. The suns rays hit Muntage’s face as she slowly opened her eyes only to find Eragon’s arm securely around her she smiled and gently combed his mind for him to wake up. “Eragon wake up please I cannot move” no answer came from him but his arm slowly moved Muntage got up and went to get some wood Kovu was alerted and held his head up to watch Muntage who gathered and placed fire wood in the pit she had made her mind suddenly was filled with roses and tress of lush greens and pine she smiled and looked at Eragon who grimaced in pain and lifted his pants only to see that the scabs on his knees cracked. Muntage ran towards Kovu and grabbed her pack she rushed over to Eragon and placed her hands over his scabs and ripped them off Eragon roared in pain Saphira bellowed in her throat but Kovu nudged her she calmed down. Muntage placed her palms on his knees and chanted some words they could be heard by Eragon her hands glowed and there was a strange feeling in hi legs, they were healed not a bruise nor scratch.
“Thank you but how?” “Not how why?” he asked as it echoed into her mind she smiled and handed him the pack “Here there is a lake not far Kovu will show you there is soap and armory I’m sure it will fit you.” She said her violet eyes glittered as she motioned for Kovu to take Eragon to the lake, as they left Eragon smiled at Muntage for the first time it was a deep thank you smile as he followed the large dragon with amusement at its massive steps that rattled the earth. The male dragons were larger than the females, what amused Eragon was that maybe Saphira was starting to form a bond with Kovu and just maybe they could be mates and breed a new race of powerful dragons like the dragons and elevens did long before his time. As they neared he heard the rushing of water the lake was flowing Kovu laid down looking the opposite way of Eragon as she quickly stripped down to his birthday suit and scrambled through the pack and jumped into the freezing cold lake but it was refreshing he scrubbed every part of his body with care as well as his face the soap smelled like vanilla a gentle vanilla.
Muntage waited for Eragon and Kovu to return it was awkward sitting with a female dragon but Saphira wasn’t ditzy she let a low roar rock her throat and nuzzled Muntage who patted her the earth started to rumble as Kovu walked the earth Eragon stood with pride with the navy armor on Eragon smiled with pride he locked eyes with Muntage and leaped down off of Kovu’s massive head 10 feet above the ground a new power growing within him he ran towards her and hugged her “Thank you for this armor but where did you get this” he asked with amazement she smiled and poked the fire “I was working for a black smith that was when I found Kovu’s egg it was my duty to protect it I thought it was of great value but it wasn’t when the traders came I asked they said it was wroth nothing my efforts were tireless. So I decide that to feed my mother and my older brother I would have to work.” She sighed Eragon slowly sunk this information in.
Eragon spoke “but they said nothing you took a job and when you returned some strangers had destroyed something dearest to you right?” he said with sorrow she nodded a single sky blue tear fell from her eye Eragon whipped it away she smiled and he embraced her “I won’t let anything happen to you I promise” he said she sent vivid images of white doves and angels into his mind suddenly as the departed Eragon was knocked down by a shadow he struggled he kicked the person off with his legs it landed in the shadows and grunted in pain it launched at Eragon again who did his best Muntage looked behind her and saw a jade scaled dragon who attacked at Kovu fiercely they bellowed. Muntage cart wheeled and flipped onto Saphira’s tail who catapulted her onto Kovu’s head he stopped as did the dragon in front that was a bit smaller than Kovu. She then slid down the smooth scales of Kovu and leaped and flipped in between Eragon and the stranger who hissed in a male voice “move!” it spoke Muntage didn’t move.
“My name is Thanos yours? Girl?” he snarled and pulled his hood down revealing chestnut shoulder length hair his deep blue eyes glared at Eragon he walked over to Muntage and took her hand she ripped it away from him and walked away. Thanos was silent Eragon followed her she sat and glared daggers as Thanos joined them.
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