Wingless demon - Torn angel

[samjohngabby]

Ok, I wanted to see how interesting the title was. I will start with an epilogue, by the way.

Epilogue-
This is starting with a female named Erykiki who was part angel part demon. About 40%(rounded up) angel, if you want to get technical. Anyway, she was about 5'10, not extremley tall, but tall. She has red and black hair, also.
Anyway, the story takes place in some forest(haven't thought a name yet) with alot of dark creatures. Creatures such a slaiyers, for instance, who destroy demons and angels not so much for the good of man kind but for the absolute fun of it. Erykiki, the main character in this story, became a victem of this slayer, Kaiden. Erykiki and Kaiden were both characters I made up some time ago(don't know how long), but they are both important characters of mine. Anyway, it takes place in I guess modern time, around 2004-2005.
What its about it Erykiki's past, harships in life and love, and her relationship with mankind, demons, angels, and her own parents. Also, the relationships with her parents, freinds, strangers, and love.

So, have fun with your information from there and come up with whatever you think the story is going to be about. It will soon be posted, but probabley not until the week end or whatever.

[E.N.T]

Sounds good! ^-^

[samjohngabby]

Noriko said:

Sounds good! ^-^

Oh, thanks. I thought about it alot and my math teacher was interested in reading it after I was done. =]

[samjohngabby]

Chapter One
{Fourteen years before Erykiki}

The dance so far had gone smoothley; a tall male with a black coat was busy courting a slender female with long red hair. The male had short brown hair about half an inch's length and swift, ice blue eyes. His eyes dazzled as he talked to the female named Taryna.
He had been watching this female closley for months, having a huge liking for her. Taryna, unfortunatley, had little knowledge of his existance until the dance.
She spoke to him calmly and just talking as though it was meeting another person, while Zeki acted like it was the best day of his life.
While they talked another male entered there conversation by asking the Taryna to dance. She accepted to the male's offer and danced with him. The male had jet black hair that was an inch's length. He was 25, just like Taryna. Zeki, the first male, had been 27, which must have been a draw back to Taryna. Taryna and this new male, Valdez, danced with each other for much longer then Zeki had anticipated, and not until the last song had they stopped dancing. When the last song started playing, Zeki asked Taryna if she wanted to dance, but she refused, claiming she was to tired to dance any more.
Heart broken, Zeki soon fled from the dance, claiming revenge against Valdez.
Many months passed as Taryna and Valdez grew closer and closer to each other, and Zeki soon drifted from Taryna's memory. In pure misery Zeki watched the couple grow closer and closer. In a year the couple decided to get married, and Zeki was sent an inventation.
Zeki, receiving the inventation two days before the dance, made up his mind right at the spot. His decision was obviously not to go. But a day passed and his mind began to linger over to the side of revenge and misery, and small hope. So, by the day of the wedding he decided he would go, and on the way to the wedding he wore a smirk in pale lips.

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Chapter Two
Zeki's Revenge

At the wedding he sat comfortabley as he watched Taryna. He sat through the whole wedding without any flinch or misery, just a smirk of delight. He watched the beautfiul Taryna gaze lovingly at Valdez, and Zeki could do nothing but think as though he was his worst enimy, Valdez, that Taryna was gazing at. His smirk remained on his lips as his evil plan grew darker and darker in the most shadowed part of his mind. Already his mind had lurked into its own hate, and this had happened through not only Zeki thinking it through but Taryna as well.
At the wedding reception he had met a female, who was Taryna's best freind basically. The female had long brown hair with golden highlights. The female also had dazzling, emerald green eyes. The female was Valexa, and Zeki soon asked her to dance. They danced almost the entire time during the wedding reception and sat by each other at dinner.
A year later Valexa and Zeki got married, and the entire time Zeki remained the evil plot for his revenge deep in his mind, but he would never mention it to Valexa. After their marriage he soon told Valexa the story of Taryna, though he twisted the truth far worse then what it was. And he explained the hatred Valdez had for him and the cruelty Valdez did to him and how Taryna ignored him. The truth had been so twisted and ugly that at first Valexa didn't believe him. But soon she got on his side and hated Taryna. After this Valexa had always been rude to Valdez and told Taryna how she made a mistake. But soon Taryna acted snooty on accident, and got Valexa to be cruel to not only Valdez, but Taryna. No, Valexa was not cruel as in spitting names and hitting, but she was rude as to avoid Taryna and Valdez, and how to say that she felt so distant ever since Valdez went into Taryna's life.
A year later Zeki was happy with Valexa, and loved her more than he hated Valdez! Zeki explained how he wanted a child with Valexa, and he soon explained that he wanted it to be named Kaiden. After this a few months past, and Valexa got suspicious on why Zeki had been so planned out. "Why are you so ready?" Valexa would ask, and when Zeki was so disrupted by her questions he soon explained his cruel plan for revenge....